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[ON HOLD!] In love with a Marine

[ON HOLD!] In love with a Marine

4.3K Reads 268 Votes 16 Part Story
💕👽Lovable Alien👽💕 By Kawaiiyugi Updated May 22

Yugi and Joey are always hanging out together since they are best buds till one day they decide to head to a brand new cafe. Joey and Yugi saw two Marines and of course they both knew that one of them was Seto Kaiba the captain of one of the Marine groups. Then there was another guy who looked like Yugi except he had Crimson eyes and was taller with a serious and confident look. Yugi orders something to eat for Him and Joey till suddenly he bumps into the Crimson eyed man and the coffee spills all over Yugi. The Crimson eyed man bought Yugi a new drink and offered him some new clothes but Yugi was to shy to accept. Seto then arrives and talks to Joey and Yugi. After that the crimson introduced himself. The Two Marines invited Yugi and Joey to a VIP club and of course Yugi was shy about it. Will this party change Yugi and Joey's life or will this party go into a disaster?

xRachii xRachii 4 days ago
The only issue I have with this story is all of the grammar and punctuation mistakes. Plus, you write it like it's a role-play. The characterization and storyline is good, but I think you should get a beta reader.
Sakurasennen Sakurasennen Aug 28, 2016
My. God!  This. Is. The. Best!  Oni-chan this is soooooo great!  I can't wait for the next chapter. 😍💕💖💙
exyami exyami Jul 27, 2016
I loved it so much!!!! And you put in my two favorite shippings! Puzzleshipping and Puppyshipping!
elishane33 elishane33 Sep 13, 2016
Your story isso greatt ^_^ hello i am Eli sakura small brother