Life after the car accident

Life after the car accident

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Sarah Twinner By merrell_love Completed

🚨!COMPLETED!🚨 
After a life threatening  car crash one of the twins is left grieving. 
Some may say it was a tragedy others say deliberate, Read to find out. 
Sometimes miracles do happen but with every positive comes a negative!
(Note: I advise you read from the very start as it may get quite confusing)

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Nightengale30 Nightengale30 May 15, 2017
"to do a a collab they'd been wanting to do for so long they couldn't remember."
lovablegrape lovablegrape 6 days ago
We all see it was edited we see the color on the windows and if you don’t you need glasses 👓
Nightengale30 Nightengale30 May 15, 2017
"The whole neighborhood was empty, *and* there wasn't anyone in sight." It's a run on sentence otherwise.
Nightengale30 Nightengale30 May 15, 2017
*Sight. You wouldn't use trace of anyone" and "Anyone in sight" at the same time. Two different sayings.
Nightengale30 Nightengale30 May 15, 2017
Sounds better if you say, "Recently, they reached one million subscribers"
Nightengale30 Nightengale30 May 15, 2017
First sentence is a run on.  Period after 1996. Semicolon after "Best friends"