Life after the car accident

Life after the car accident

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Sarah Twinner By merrell_love Updated Dec 06

After a life threatening  car crash one of the twins is left grieving. 

Some may say it was a tragedy others say deliberate, Read to find out. 

Sometimes miracle do happen but with every positive comes a negative!

(Note: I advise you read from the very start as it may get quite confusing)

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"to do a a collab they'd been wanting to do for so long they couldn't remember."
"The whole neighborhood was empty, *and* there wasn't anyone in sight." It's a run on sentence otherwise.
*Sight. You wouldn't use trace of anyone" and "Anyone in sight" at the same time. Two different sayings.
Sounds better if you say, "Recently, they reached one million subscribers"
First sentence is a run on.  Period after 1996. Semicolon after "Best friends"
YugiMerrell YugiMerrell Jan 04