The Unwanted Half-breed

The Unwanted Half-breed

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MizukoWaterchild By MizukoWaterchild Updated Jan 18, 2017

(SLOWLY EDITING! THIS IS A ROUGH DRAFT, SO YES, ITS ALMOST UNBEARABLE TO READ!) 

Im the unwanted,the unloved, and the despised. To others, that would seem horrible. To me, it's something that I have lived with, something that I have learned to be okay with.
It means no connections,no betrayals, nothing that could possibly hurt me in the future.

Im emotionless,cruel and dangerous, a ruthless human being that will kill anyone in her path. Being like this makes me happy. Or at least....that's what I tell myself.

No ones ever tried to understand me so why should I try to understand others. 

There's three rules that keep me alive, that helps me make it through everyday, three rules that define who I am, and what I have to do.
 1. Finish the mission at all costs. 
2. Dont leave any evidence behind. 
3. Dont get attached.
 These rules I gave myself, worked perfectly in every mission. Every mission was a success, meaning I got to live another day.....Until one ends up going horribly wrong......making me have to run for my life....and relive a past that I had wished to keep buried.
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Warning: swearing is in this book(like Hidan swearing), im warning you before hand,so please no complaints.
WARNING!!- I HAVEN'T EDITED MUCH!

P.S this book is also my first Fanfic, so please bear with me..

All rights are reserved to the original creators of 'Magi' I only own my personal OC's
I do not own the picture of this cover, just small edits. (Pictures/Media are not mine unless proven otherwise)

The plot is mine, and so are most of the ideas. If you see any ideas that you might think are yours, plz message me. This book is not allowed to be copyed, or distributed in anyway unless first being allowed by me. If you see any books at have copyed my plot or my characters please contact me.

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theresa-may theresa-may Aug 02, 2016
Interesting plot so far! I thought it was cool how it starts off from the perspective of someone that the reader doesn't know. Just make sure to read over your work. You have a couple of grammatical errors and some missing punctuation. But I really like this so far!
theresa-may theresa-may Aug 02, 2016
I'm going to let you in on a secret (I like filler chapters!!!) ANYWAYS, I think you should space out some of your dialogue because it can be a bit difficult to read when it's in a giant chunk. But other than that, amazing chapter!