The Unwanted Half-breed

The Unwanted Half-breed

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MizukoWaterchild By MizukoWaterchild Updated Nov 25

Im the unwanted,the unloved,the despised,and frankly Im okay with that.  It meant no connections,no betrayals,no deaths that could hurt you in the future. Im emotionless,cruel and dangerous,just the way I like it. No ones ever tryed to understand me so why should I try to understand others. I live by three different rules.
 1. Finish the mission at all costs. 2. Dont leave any evidence behind. 3. Dont get attached. These rules I gave myself, worked perfectly in every mission. Until one ends up going horribly wrong. 

Warning: swearing is in this book, im warning you before hand,so please no complaints.
WARNING!!- I HAVEN'T EDITED MUCH!

P.S this book is also my first Fanfic, so please bear with me..

All rights are reserved to the original creators of 'Magi' I only own my personal OC's
I do not own the picture of this cover, just small edits.

messytessa messytessa Aug 02
Interesting plot so far! I thought it was cool how it starts off from the perspective of someone that the reader doesn't know. Just make sure to read over your work. You have a couple of grammatical errors and some missing punctuation. But I really like this so far!
messytessa messytessa Aug 02
I'm going to let you in on a secret (I like filler chapters!!!) ANYWAYS, I think you should space out some of your dialogue because it can be a bit difficult to read when it's in a giant chunk. But other than that, amazing chapter!