This is a fan fic but if you are under the age of 13 leave
Omf just them in jacks house living litterly in the middle of no where with nobody else.
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I don't ship septiplier at all but I'm just trying to read some smut bc Ive read all of the Phan smut oops
•There should be quotation marks when Jack says "Hey you should visit Ireland".
•There needs to be a new paragraph everytime someone new is speaking or whenever the scene has a new focus.
•There should be some build up to the story.
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I don't know when the POV changes because you don't put it in the story