Red Butterfly

Red Butterfly

305 Reads 4 Votes 3 Part Story
blackrose1028 By blackrose1028 Updated Jul 25, 2011

Kim King Yon is a 6 year old girl living in North Korea during the times of the Korean War. Having lost everything the little girl warps in to a older mind of a vengful young adult. Times of war come and go some ended more quickly than others thanks to Special Forces Foxtrot. Fox Trot took the young girl in and raised her as one of them. Now the girl must go on a special mission one that will lead her to happyness and maybe even love........

scalooosh scalooosh Mar 30, 2011
The story is great, punctuation and spelling. especially in to. into.
scalooosh scalooosh Mar 30, 2011
I really like the concept, but your wording is a little simple. Don't get me wrong! I think the wording suits it when Kim is talking because she's six. :)
blackrose1028 blackrose1028 Dec 27, 2010
the chapters are several pages long in microsoft word. so sorry if they seem really short here.