Flip a Coin (on hold)

Flip a Coin (on hold)

858 Reads 27 Votes 5 Part Story
Lia. ~Atomic Tigah~ By zayilatan Updated Feb 02, 2011

Lesley Davidson is a sixteen-year old girl who finds that a necklace she was given as a child is actually an ancient, powerful artefact. While almost getting killed one night, Lesley is saved by Kai, a mysterious boy working for the even more mysterious Tisen Guards.Unable to take the necklace off, she must protect it from Sorcerers and evil Creatures that want the power for themselves. Now she must deal with many things -including her growing feelings for Kai- and break the spell that binds her to the necklaces power.

Surreallis Surreallis Feb 08, 2011
hey hey!
                              If you know who this is, then goldfish and cherry wars means something to you. haha.
                              Excellent beginning. You master suspense quite well, and it makes me want to read more!
zayilatan zayilatan Feb 02, 2011
@eyeofthebeholder 
                                 Thumbs up for honesty, thanks for reading :)
Beatlemaniac18 Beatlemaniac18 Jan 11, 2011
hey Lia!
                              Thanx 4 voting and reading mine! I love your story!
                              But U already know that...
Loraphine Loraphine Jan 08, 2011
Quite engaging. Love the prologue, personally. In a page you've managed to make the Doctor endearing, and Lesley, an innocent one begins to feel protective of. VERY well-done. Voted/Archived.
eyeofthebeholder eyeofthebeholder Jan 08, 2011
I will be honest, there is not much to base it on, but the summary of the story seems interesting! Off to the next chapter :D
zayilatan zayilatan Dec 28, 2010
@Carly_the_alien 
                              The story is in the present, although the first chapter is in the past. The main character, Lesley is 16 in the story and this is sort of like a flashback to when she first got this necklace, which plays an important part on the rest of the story. Thanks for reading :)