Arabella ( Sirius Black Love Story )

Arabella ( Sirius Black Love Story )

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Lexi By lexithebrit Completed

Arabella Stein lived in Germany until she turned eleven. With the rise of Voldemort, her pure blood family decided to move to England. Her parents wanted to be able to help Voldemort, so Arabella would be attending Hogwarts. Arabella didn't like the other people her family mixed themselves with, except for one boy named Sirius Black.

  • harrypotter
  • hogwarts
  • jamespotter
  • lilyevans
  • remuslupin
  • sirusblack
Volchitsa07 Volchitsa07 Jun 29
No you won't. You'll be in gryffindor cos this is a fanfic and it would be almost illegal for you to be anything other than a gryffindor but at least you're optimistic
owl_me764 owl_me764 Aug 25, 2016
Hermione: Professor R. J Lupin
                              Ron: How did you know?
                              Hermione: Ifs on his case, Ronald!!
                              
                              Sorry, I had to
holdencaulfieldsays holdencaulfieldsays Jan 11, 2017
This looks really good. Also this is funny to me since my main characters name is Elsie, and she hates Sirius Black😂
Minor tweak needed here: she put on some clothes. However, you could show a little more nervousness as this is her first day in a new school, by her looking at the new school uniform that had been hanging in her closet and hoping she would look the part.
Another minor tweak, you need to add the letter d to make this word bed.
This would be a great place to describe what Sirius and Regulus look like. And whether or not Arabella thinks they are cute. (Ten and eleven year old boys are too young to be considered handsome, but cute - oh yeah.)