The Memoirs of Light

The Memoirs of Light

4.2K Reads 132 Votes 15 Part Story
kt By raindropsfall Updated Jan 25, 2013

What if the seven elements that governed the world came to life? What if one of them was evil beyond imagining? What if one of them was you?
Jaylin doesn’t feel special. She’s a foundling who can’t remember her childhood, and she’s got to be the only 18-year-old who’s still afraid of the dark. When she is driven away from her home and taken in by five people with strange qualities,  she finds out just how special she is and that she has good reason to fear the shadows. She is the living embodiment of Light destined to defy Rama, the bloodthirsty representative of Darkness. Can she find the strength to face her worst fears, especially knowing that they have defeated and killed her in the past?

  • abuse
  • addam
  • adulthood
  • aedan
  • aeden
  • afraid
  • air
  • alone
  • anger
  • angry
  • army
  • arrow
  • avir
  • bear
  • bedroom
  • black
  • bow
  • caldor
  • cave
  • ceremony
  • cermony
  • charms
  • chase
  • child
  • choice
  • cloths
  • cloud
  • coffee
  • cold
  • dark
  • darkness
  • decision
  • deer
  • destruction
  • different
  • doe
  • dread
  • dream
  • dress
  • drunk
  • earth
  • eaten
  • eclipse
  • elements
  • elora
  • evil
  • explanations
  • fall
  • fear
  • feed
  • festival
  • fight
  • fire
  • flee
  • flight
  • fly
  • flying
  • forest
  • fortress
  • fox
  • genophobia
  • gift
  • girl
  • glow
  • glowing
  • god
  • gone
  • grass
  • hang
  • howling
  • hunger
  • hunt
  • jaylin
  • jayling
  • journey
  • leaves
  • lessons
  • light
  • lightbulbs
  • lodge
  • lost
  • maka
  • maurus
  • meat
  • meeting
  • memoirs
  • memories
  • mist
  • moon
  • morning
  • mother
  • mountain
  • naiida
  • nervousness
  • night
  • nightmares
  • pack
  • pain
  • plain
  • plains
  • power
  • pressure
  • prisoners
  • pruchod
  • rama
  • rays
  • red
  • run
  • silence
  • slave
  • sleep
  • snow
  • solemn
  • souls
  • speed
  • spirit
  • storm
  • story
  • sun
  • teaching
  • throwing
  • track
  • travel
  • trees
  • village
  • villagers
  • walking
  • water
  • wind
  • wolves
Wolfspaw32 Wolfspaw32 Mar 07, 2014
Boo!! Haha just kidding. This seems like a really good story so far.
Hannah_Janine Hannah_Janine Jan 19, 2014
I loved how you described the elements. It was almost Native American like.
Hannah_Janine Hannah_Janine Jan 19, 2014
This is a really well written prologue. Impressive. I really liked you're detailed descriptions. They way you describe the woods is really enticing, and it keeps me interested in the story. Great job!
raindropsfall raindropsfall May 27, 2012
@Willow_P Yeah, that's what a crappy upload schedule will do for ya :) glad you're enjoying it!
Willow_P Willow_P May 26, 2012
This is so good. I'm surprised more people aren't reading it :(
raindropsfall raindropsfall Dec 19, 2010
@lalawebb thank you!!! i think it's gonna turn out well :) man, i love comments