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Mindless Behavior One-Shots [✔]

Mindless Behavior One-Shots [✔]

21.5K Reads 812 Votes 30 Part Story
❝ 🐶💜 ❞ By OfficiallyNeicey Completed

Short Story/Imagines about MB. Enjoy!

snarkily snarkily Sep 04, 2016
Your- possessive.
                              You're- contraction of you and are. 
                              They are very easy to get confused when typing
snarkily snarkily Sep 04, 2016
A little advice, you used 'said' and 'spat' everytime someone talks. Use synonyms like 'uttered', or 'mumbled'. Also the wat this is written in all italics is kind of weird. And the thing when people say 'this many votes and I'll update' sounds needy. 
                              Hope these are helpful and not jerky.
OfficiallyNeicey OfficiallyNeicey Jul 25, 2016
Sorry if it says that it's supposed to say   ''No I'm not cheating on you.''   sorry for the error.