smut for ya sluts
Not to be 'that person' but when you said "after lifting his shirt off his lips went back to mine" there should be a comma between 'off' and 'his'. The meaning is changed when there isn't a comma. Also this is a great story I love it, have a great day.
That was actually pretty good for your first smut
I mean nothing was wrong with it, that was probably one of the best smuts I've ever read
I HAVE READ A LOT OF SMUTS MY FREN
OK I THOUGHT THE DOOR WAS OPEN AND TY WALKED IN AND JUST SAW THAT HAPPEN
I can imagine Tyler watching her pulling him in the dressing røøm frøm a distance and saying, "I prøbably shøuldn't gø in there før a few minutes"