Summer's First Snowfall

Summer's First Snowfall

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Amber By __SimplyAmbz Updated Dec 31, 2010

Seventeen-year-old Summer Allen moves from her home in Hawaii to her father's home in New Jersery. Her dad's getting married to his girlfriend of three years, Camia, and Summer's going to be one of the bridesmaids. Camia suggests that Summer spends her last year in high school in New Jersey so she won't miss out on any of the excitement. Both of her parents agree and it's not long before Summer's on a plane to New Jersey. Join Summer on her journey of new things, including first love, heartbreak, new friends, and of course, Summer's first snowfall.

Sunshinebby Sunshinebby Dec 31, 2010
Um...it was okay. Whole lot of errors but nothing you won't catch if you look it over. Um, I liked the dialogue and connection between Summer and her father. Maybe if you added more depth to the story, you'd give more to the plot and character development. But it's good so far (: