These poems are what you'd find if you dug deep enough in my brain.
I thought about that line too. I mean, I hate that people tak advantage of that freedom, and no one stops them. I'll make that clearere
Is the truth.
But I'm confused bout the line "I hate the freedom"
Like freedom to do wrong as well as right? Should we be chained down?
It made me tingle at the end, it felt like you were allowing me to go down in your thoughts with you
btw, u spelled biased wrong. and i started a new story yesterday.. called his-story, her-story. can u check it out?
And it recommended collision and just my luck by mermadejakk! Hhh
You have similar writing tactic as me! I nearly always end my poems with the title! And this reminds me a tiny bit of my poem, voicing my outrage, except this is on a larger scale. Like it!