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Bella By Bellajaan Completed

Erika Williams goes to Mariposa  high school. She's okay being daddy's girl and having the best two friends in this world well till she meets and falls in love with Aaron Johnson. 

Aaron Johnson,well known as AJ is the quarter back on his football team. The first time he saw Erika was the moment he fell in love with her. 


#423 in General Fiction on 26/01/17

  • betrayal
  • friendship
  • high
  • love
  • romance
  • school
JasmineTheDreamer JasmineTheDreamer Sep 10, 2013
I would get a proof reader. Grammar mistakes make it a little difficult to read. :) Try to spice things up a little bit. Instead of her getting stomach indigestion - maybe she falls in the cafeteria? It would go in with the unpopular title she's labeled.
JasmineTheDreamer JasmineTheDreamer Sep 10, 2013
I would switch up the description and title a little bit. The title is a little..blah and the description gives away a bit too much. When you're discreet, it makes people get mire intrigued and read the story more. :)