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Charlay Marie By CharlayMarie1 Updated Jul 25, 2016

In the futuristic city of Octavius, Tonk - a half human, half robot girl - sets out to rid her city of the other rogue hybrids as commanded by her creators, but after being tracked by an interesting male hybrid named Rik, she learns that she's fighting on the wrong side.

AshleyStaar AshleyStaar Mar 18
crazy world you have there, sounds really interesting, I think I will keep on reading, you have my curiosity now.
Oh, this is so good! U really need to get published, b/c I'm in love with your writing!
JonGatz JonGatz Mar 21
You have an really well developed style for adding in the world building details in the narrative, without feeling like it's being vomited on the reader. Looking forward to reading more!
BrieDanvers BrieDanvers Feb 12
This is really good. It's flowing well, keeping me intrigued, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Hohiropere Hohiropere Jul 23, 2016
100th Read. (:
                              Wait... Is she going to become a evil mastermind and go kill everyone? 
                              Maybe she'll fall through a portal and come to Iceland... She could fall in love with the fire lander King... ;D
camillagordellion camillagordellion Oct 21, 2016
*an, not AN, and *a, not A. Capitals do not belong in the middle of a sentence unless if they are at the beginning a proper noun, such as a name or I