My New Daddy

My New Daddy

78.9K Reads 2.3K Votes 27 Part Story
LoveBooks214 By LoveBooks214 Completed

A little girl is witness to her whole family being abused by her step father. Will she be saved or will he end her life forever?

The first couple chapters are really short and need to be fixed up. After that the story becomes a lot better. It's just the difference of starting to write it on my phone and then finally getting a laptop to write my story on.

Omgg is that her stepdad!? He can't treat a child like that :O
cristalbrown10 cristalbrown10 Nov 18, 2014
i want to read more after chapter 24 plz make more its just getting good
your_next_friend your_next_friend Nov 03, 2014
Nice beginning. First time I saw such a small child as the narrator. Let me guess, first book?
egomaniacK egomaniacK Oct 27, 2014
Id punch him and call the police ain't nobody laying a finger on me