What if Isabella Swan was a vampire before she met Edward Cullen? Would they still feel the same way about each other? Would they still love each other? What will happen that will change their lives forever?
People like it because its very hard to find a good twilight fanfic on WATTPAD.
It's nice to read a book with long chapters I just read a book to where the longest chapter was three of my phone pages
Spelling and grammar isn't what makes the story good. The thought effort and time put into Is what counts.
WHOA.............. THAT SHORT WAS THE ONLY STORY I ON WATTPAD THAT I HAVE RECENTLY READ THAT ISN'T SHITTY
amazing and it's just first chapter and i don't really care about grammar or speling :D i mean spelling mistakes i just like the plot
You need to lenghten your chapters. You need to be more into depth. You seem to rush through. But that is just my opinion.