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Richard West By richardknightwalker Updated 3 days ago

Taking your life is the ultimate taboo in the Christian and Catholic religions. By doing this, you condemn your soul to the pits of hell. Where you will burn for eternity. Although this proves to be true, there is still a glimmer of hope for some of these doomed souls. Some will have a chance to escape their cruel fate and be reborn again. 
   Sadly, to gain such a privilege, they must participate in a tournament in which they will face a series of insane challenges. The participants of the game, will have to deal with demons, fight other contestants, or even encounter the reason why they killed themselves in the first place. Their wits and the item they used to end their life with. Will be their only weapons in this twisted nightmare.
  Which of these condemned souls will turn out victorious from the games? Or will they all burn in hell for their unforgivable sins or will the lose their sanity? 
  (Warning: Strong language is used)

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Considering I can see myself in this situation....
                              Scare blankly at Joy before accepting, then go to find Satan and say to him, "Hey heyy it's Satan, long time no talk"
EmotionalMisfit EmotionalMisfit 5 days ago
It'll be 7 years since I lost my adopted dad. My birth dad I'm having to talk to in secret because my adopted mom ( who biologically is my grandma.) absolutely hates him.
Shade_queens Shade_queens 6 days ago
I'd be screwed either way. Go to hell or die and go to hell in a game😂
leelaisawesome leelaisawesome 4 days ago
Nah fudge that. Who wants to go to a place where there's nothing but heteros. THAT WOULD BE WORSE THAN HELL. Like nah fudge heaven imma skip into hell by myself.
EmotionalMisfit EmotionalMisfit 5 days ago
Me if I was in there.
                              Me: well...first nice to meet you. Second. What kind of name is Joyous?
                              Also me: you suck at your job because I'm dead.