Things Are Not What They Seem

Things Are Not What They Seem

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Call me Star or Starlight By xStarliightzx Updated Mar 26, 2011

Kailyn (pronounced Cay-lin) had been kidnapped--and her parents killed--right when she was born, and was raised and trained by the most dangerous assassin in the world at the S.A.A. (Secret Assassination Agency). She was taught all the wrong things, and was isolated from the goodness of life. 

	At age nine, her "father" has her going through the top most dangerous training of all, surpassing all the others at the agency. At age fourteen, she's out killing important people--mayors, rockstars, people of the government...

	Kailyn has become her father's pawn, killing whoever he wants without knowing what's really going on. She was raised to not know right from wrong, and finally, at age seventeen, she is sent on a mission to kill the president.

                     On the way she meets a boy. A boy around her age, who is different. She doesn't understand him, but seems to have this undying pull towards him, and she will soon learn that everything is not what it seems.

Oh an alley? Honestly what a bad move. Like have you seen any movies where they go into and alley and come back alive? 
                              i thought not
Line_gavnholt Line_gavnholt Dec 10, 2015
Love the mystery and the tension could use a little more description. Looking forward to seeing what next chapter will be like. Keep up the good work :)
RahniH RahniH Sep 22, 2014
I always have the same problem with writing- you have to go deeper into the explanation. Instead if writing one thing and skipping to the other, stay on the same subject for a while then, change the subject subtly.
BookLover199 BookLover199 Feb 06, 2011
Interesting, I really like it. You're good at explaining the story, I wasn't confused or board  while reading! Nice work! ;)
- - Feb 05, 2011
Ah I liked this a lot. Great job. Fanned and added to library. Could you return the favor?
xStarliightzx xStarliightzx Feb 04, 2011
@xXxTwilightLuverxXx Okay thanks so much for your feedback :) I'll try and see what else I can add here.