The Cost of Living

The Cost of Living

1.3K Reads 68 Votes 1 Part Story
David Moody By DavidMoody Completed

How far would you go to survive? A (very) short piece of flash fiction originally hosted by www.thisishorror.co.uk as part of their Flash Fear series.

  • autumn
  • david
  • hater
  • moody
  • zombie
YvetteYseult YvetteYseult Jun 09, 2018
8/10
                              Maybe the ending could be better. But the story flows nicely, and isn't cluttered up with unfortunate extras. I can see it as something actually happening. Were they really the last ones left? Who knows? 
                              Somehow, I expected a violent kill 'em all. I was , I suppose, half right.
Rainbow_warriorx Rainbow_warriorx Aug 29, 2013
i love this story it was just just amazing so un predictable
- - Aug 29, 2013
Wow. This was just....wow. Unbelievable. But so good. Awesome story
LittleCinnamon LittleCinnamon Aug 26, 2013
I admit to squealing a little bit when I saw you had added a story. 
                              
                              Love it :)
FiskLiterary FiskLiterary Aug 26, 2013
A very neat bit of flash with a succinct moral.
                              Very nice.
                              
                              Gem.
TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Aug 26, 2013
Great little piece of short fiction David, atmospheric, dark and all too believable. Neatly done sir, Gav