The Cost of Living

The Cost of Living

1.2K Reads 66 Votes 1 Part Story
David Moody By DavidMoody Completed

How far would you go to survive? A (very) short piece of flash fiction originally hosted by www.thisishorror.co.uk as part of their Flash Fear series.

  • autumn
  • david
  • hater
  • moody
  • zombie
8/10
                              Maybe the ending could be better. But the story flows nicely, and isn't cluttered up with unfortunate extras. I can see it as something actually happening. Were they really the last ones left? Who knows? 
                              Somehow, I expected a violent kill 'em all. I was , I suppose, half right.
Rainbow_warriorx Rainbow_warriorx Aug 29, 2013
i love this story it was just just amazing so un predictable
DelicateEclipse DelicateEclipse Aug 29, 2013
Wow. This was just....wow. Unbelievable. But so good. Awesome story
LittleCinnamon LittleCinnamon Aug 26, 2013
I admit to squealing a little bit when I saw you had added a story. 
                              
                              Love it :)
FiskLiterary FiskLiterary Aug 26, 2013
A very neat bit of flash with a succinct moral.
                              Very nice.
                              
                              Gem.
TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Aug 26, 2013
Great little piece of short fiction David, atmospheric, dark and all too believable. Neatly done sir, Gav