Lily has lived in an orphanage as long as she can remember
She got abused daily, until a man with long black hair came to adopt her...
*Rolls eyes* Really snape really? she's a CHILD and she's used to being punished for things like that *slaps him* GET A HEART SNAPE *walks off shaking her head and muttering like a dissapointed mother*
Oh my gods this actually braught tears to my eyes and thats hard to do for me because I barely cry anymore
The little girl is the woman/girl in Supernatural that was reenacting the Grimm fairy tales right?
I really like the plot line and the editing job is spotless. The story is progressing a little too fast for my taste, but other than that it is amazing!
Okay, HOW IS THIS ONLY THE FIRST CHAPTER!?!? I write soooo short chapters. My brother keeps complaining that my stories have to end but I'm like "No they don't you dummy!! The author decides that!! Which is ME not YOU!!" And then I laugh in his face. That's pretty much life to me!!
I'd be so overwhelmed if that be me as a child
I'd be like "cool story bro" and "where's my KPOP"