So Young.

So Young.

4.5K Reads 89 Votes 5 Part Story
Jay Lexis By aTouchOfClass Updated May 03, 2011

At her birth it bloomed and flourished, a love. But they were separated for nearly a lifetime; seventeen years. When it comes down to visit for Sarah’s wedding, Jonathan MacAnthony is a grown man but hasn’t forgotten the heart clenching feeling that newborn baby inflicted on him. He’s curious about what has become of her and knows that she’s a young woman. Will she remember anything of him? What is bound to happen at the wedding?

This is a love story of another kind. Follow the love story that is between Jonathan MacAnthony and Kimberly Richardson, keep in mind that you’ll be surprise at the turn of events.

    KeepDatBeatPumpin KeepDatBeatPumpin Nov 22, 2011
    oopssorry it's sarah who's gettin married, not linda (srry my bad)
    KeepDatBeatPumpin KeepDatBeatPumpin Nov 22, 2011
    woopsies!
                                  i fought i 4got 2 vote so i went back - then i realsied dat i had already voted. damn! they dont let u vote twice.
                                  grr...
                                  =)
                                  luv da story, i only read 1 chapter, but im already hooked into it!!!!!
    aTouchOfClass aTouchOfClass Aug 03, 2011
    @tlm2338 Haha!! Yeah I've got three sisters myself and we're pretty close :D so it wasn't hard to create a sisterly bond :D thanks for voting and reading!!! One Question thou?? Do I have any grammar mistakes on this chapter? And I just noticed how short my chapters are? LOL
    taymo09 taymo09 Aug 03, 2011
    I loved their sisterly dialogue!! Sarah reminds me of my older sister.  She picks on Kim some but you can really tell she loves her! I'm glad we got to see that part of their relationship! :)  Voted!
    aTouchOfClass aTouchOfClass Aug 02, 2011
    @tlm2338 Haha! That's awesome LOL no I seriously didn't know you lived in Austin Texas LOL and I'm not sure I understand what you mean about the second sentence? Could you maybe tell me it in another way?? Sorry lol
    neelvin neelvin Mar 20, 2011
    hey! u want comments on ur story then y dont u update it atleast in a week. I just forgot about the story with ur mail i remind it and again its more then 20 days u have not update the story. ur story is lovely but only when u update it more frequently.