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The Errant Heiress

The Errant Heiress

8.1K Reads 265 Votes 14 Part Story
MiloshPetrik By MiloshPetrik Completed

A grizzled detective, a clueless blond assistant, a heinous crime. Sounds like your cup of bourbon-laced tea? Then, click right on here!

I used to update this (almost) every Sunday. I don't do that anymore. Because it is complete.

sistahm sistahm Nov 02, 2013
A girl that can handle bourbon straight has got to have a good story.
Promeno Promeno Nov 02, 2013
The whimsical beginning crashes down into grit. You have my attention.
Fakedeadgirlfriend Fakedeadgirlfriend Sep 12, 2013
Really good writing.  I like the noir style and the imagery is excellent.
Maya_2011 Maya_2011 Sep 08, 2013
Oh! I love this beginning... didn't see it coming. Great job! A little movie intro just played in my head.
SomewhatDistracted SomewhatDistracted Sep 01, 2013
This is excellent and I am excited to read on! I like the idea of you writing a longer story!
Lady_Lucia Lady_Lucia Aug 25, 2013
Are you going to write something longer now? :o
                              I really enjoyed reading this. The similes and metaphors were really awesome and blew me away. I'm jealous. And excited to read more.
                              I also find it intriguing that it's from a female's point of view. I was assuming it was a male's.