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♡ h a z e l ♡ By lullabells Updated 8 hours ago

Highest Achievement - #7 in poetry [Oct 3, 2016]


It's delicate, but potent.
The pain from an old wound.
A twinge in your heart..
Far more powerful than memory alone

A feeling of a place
Where we...


-My thoughts. My words. You'll be charged before God if you copy so think before you do it. I can forgive anything but my poetry means THE WORLD to me. :)-

Publishing date [July 20, 2016]

I love this piece it describes me perfectly. Thank you for commenting on my page. :)
frayrays frayrays Nov 10
I love the rhythm all throughout, the repetition of 'all I see is you' really makes it stand out and stick in your brain. I love the storytelling in this poem. Nicely done. Fray.
alliated alliated 4 days ago
I cannot wait to read more. I know that I am going to love this piece.
maryginn maryginn 2 days ago
this is beautiful. i absolutely love the simplicity yet depth of your writing, keep it up! xx
Ehm...ascolta nn ho potuto rispondere al tuo messaggio su 'conversazioni' perché non posso..
                              Comunque ti ringrazio! 💖
Padfoot621 Padfoot621 Nov 27
Omg!!! I just had to screenshot this and show it to my boyfriend and tell my friends what an amazing writer you are!!! :) <3