Rosabara

Rosabara

491 Reads 6 Votes 1 Part Story
ROZeee By roxabara Updated Dec 22, 2010

i am just following procedures! what am i suppose to do with this( no idea) hope to gain support and please guide me!
how can i put this into a draft! DART i am lost

SoRose757 SoRose757 Sep 24, 2012
Hey have you edited it a bit since the last time I read? It's really good!
Thebookangels Thebookangels Oct 31, 2011
You know...im not really sure of the plot...but i have an intuition that it's gonna make you proud! :)
                              Although if you could edit out those grammar mistakes...it would be awesome! :D
                              VOTED! :)
roxabara roxabara Sep 29, 2011
@SoRose757 yeah! u read my story.thank you for the comment, i do get ahead of myself sometimes with the language in my stories, but so far i only hav this one posted, i will definately complete this. Thankx for the comment again
BringMeTheLight BringMeTheLight Dec 25, 2010
It's slighly confusing but if u explain wats goin on in the nxt chapters this has really potential
                              
                              Tip:Put dialogue on a new line every time to make it easier to read
roxabara roxabara Dec 22, 2010
this is incomplete because i need response for further upload, i have a few chapters on my rought draft but i want to c da reaction  of readers first (btw i know i am a rookie and not tht talented, it wudn't hurt to b gentle. So give response)