The Apprentice to the Moon

The Apprentice to the Moon

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Ebony Light By EbonyLightLovely Updated Dec 24, 2010

Luasim has been selected for a riveting job. Before she accepts, she must travel far to each her teacher, a strange man named Horsello. If she fails to do so, she will die, just like the one who was selected before her. In haste to keep Lua safe, the people of the Fulelian city Morsolo, send with her an accomplice, a boy named Clemete, whose sister was the one who died. Little does anyone expect Clemete will be the reason she cannot become who she must.

So, pronouncing the names, Clemete is pernounced like Clementine, minus the ine. Luasim is pernouned like blue-ah-seem, minus the b sound. Fuleli is pernounced like fudge lie ly. minus the dge part. Horsello is personed like horse yellow, minus the y. Morsolo is like more solo.
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OnceUponABook OnceUponABook Sep 19, 2011
Great start! I love the tone and description used through the whole of this chapter!
AshleyDane AshleyDane Jan 03, 2011
It's really riveting! Keep writing because I want to know what happens to her and what it means to be an oracle!!
                              Nice work! =)
caramelapplee caramelapplee Dec 24, 2010
It's not bad :). I really liked it, and hope you'll explain it a little further in the future. My favorite was the ending sentence. Upload soon, and thanks for reading my story :D. It means a lot to me that you'd start writing again because of my story. 
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                              - Emily S