Unblemished (Watty Awards 2012)

25 Part Story 158K Reads 2K Votes
criticalthinkings By criticalthinkings Completed
Shay Woods hates being ugly. Her only wish is to be like her sister, Avery- Perfect. But once she is, she's haunted by the cause of her new found lifestyle. Now, Shay realizes the only thing harder than being ugly is being unblemished.
Tiptoe... To the bathroom... eating breakfast..  rushing out the front dooor
i dont like when girls want to be skinny
                                    i am skinny and i hate it ........i would give anything to put on some pounds....
You made a situation that seems crazy fiction and obviously made up, seem like something that is realistic... So amazing. I am impressed! Keep writing!
Aww, that's so sad she wants to be like her ugly personality sister. :(
hey;))) taking up on your offer to help... how do we get a lot people to read my story? And could you read and tell us what you think about our story..  Thankiesss:D
Awwww. Poor Shay. Sorry for the late comment(s) :/ anyway your a great writer!!! You have an interesting plot that will catch people's attention. :) I think your going to get far in the Wattys. :) I love how your writing style, it's unique. :) no onto the next chapter!