Unblemished (Watty Awards 2012)

Unblemished (Watty Awards 2012)

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criticalthinkings By criticalthinkings Completed

Shay Woods hates being ugly. Her only wish is to be like her sister, Avery- Perfect. But once she is, she's haunted by the cause of her new found lifestyle. Now, Shay realizes the only thing harder than being ugly is being unblemished.

  • betrayal
  • clique
  • family
  • mystery
  • romance
  • suspense
  • teacher
  • teen
  • ugly
chiennablog chiennablog May 09, 2013
They say don't judge a book by its cover but I love your cover! Will be reading on to see how the story progresses :)
theordinaryoddity theordinaryoddity May 22, 2012
Aw nice video :). 
                              Ugh, I hate Avery! & what a friend Leah is NOT! >;(( She's stupid. -_-
criticalthinkings criticalthinkings Apr 16, 2012
@LoneMusician Thanks! No, I wish that was me! I can't dance D: I just thought it would be cool to find choreo to the song I wanted to use and luckily I found the perfect video! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
aacatalepsy aacatalepsy Apr 15, 2012
Ugh, I'm starting to hate Leah- I know it's an act but im still hating her, :/ Anyway the video on the side did you find that on YouTube or is one of those dancers you? :) they were pretty good. Anyway I'm simply loving your word choice! Off to read the rest.
thepigs thepigs Apr 15, 2012
leah >.< i think you should add a bit more of reluctance when leah insults shay so you can tell she doesn't actually mean it. and show us more of avery! why is she such a biotch? did something ever happen as kids between avery and shay?
criticalthinkings criticalthinkings Apr 15, 2012
@dain4eve Thanks for the feedback. It really is appreciated :)
                              
                              @BlackBruise Thanks so much :) Like most stories, things aren't always what they seem!