Unblemished (Watty Awards 2012)

Unblemished (Watty Awards 2012)

25 Part Story 158K Reads 2K Votes
criticalthinkings By criticalthinkings Completed

Shay Woods hates being ugly. Her only wish is to be like her sister, Avery- Perfect. But once she is, she's haunted by the cause of her new found lifestyle. Now, Shay realizes the only thing harder than being ugly is being unblemished.

Tiptoe... To the bathroom... eating breakfast..  rushing out the front dooor
Funny_bishkit Funny_bishkit Apr 06, 2013 05:40PM
i dont like when girls want to be skinny
                                    i am skinny and i hate it ........i would give anything to put on some pounds....
Charmoile Charmoile Aug 13, 2012 08:18PM
You made a situation that seems crazy fiction and obviously made up, seem like something that is realistic... So amazing. I am impressed! Keep writing!
Aww, that's so sad she wants to be like her ugly personality sister. :(
dialola dialola May 06, 2012 02:25PM
hey;))) taking up on your offer to help... how do we get a lot people to read my story? And could you read and tell us what you think about our story..  Thankiesss:D
@Dionysus Hahahaha. I find your feedback amusing and I enjoy any feedback. HATERS MAKE ME FAMOUS. I'm just kidding, but I really was mind f-cked by your comment and I appreciate that. So... thanks. I think.