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Marie's Path

Marie's Path

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Justonename By Justonename Updated Jun 27

"I always dreamed someone would come and save me. If not from my parents, maybe they'd save me from myself," Marie admitted to him. 
Marie Sorenson knew what they thought of her. She couldn't blame them really, she did fail her sister.  Yet after everything Sang went through, she still landed on top. She's pretty, smart, and she has 9 guys who would do anything for her.
  Marie knows what she thinks she see's in the mirror, a nobody. She keeps her head down. Her hair hangs around her face, hiding her shame. Hiding her secret.
She wants to change, she just doesn't know how.  Marie's path is going to be hard, but if she reaches out, she might make it.
The Toma Team is trying to heal after Kayli left. They deal with the hurt in their own ways. But one by one a lone girl captures their attention and a lost member of their team finally comes home.

  This is a fanfiction based on C.L.Stone's Academy Series. I have no claim to them

WhatSheNeeds WhatSheNeeds Sep 17, 2016
Holy crap! You just addressed all those issues that had me tense! Crazy! Love Gabe.
K_Williams1 K_Williams1 Sep 04, 2016
I see her jealousy in her words.  Excellent job.  Derrick must like her if he's kissing her and their father is a tool!
Kohbstar Kohbstar Sep 06, 2016
Well, considering I can't stand Marie, I'm actually relating to her! I can't wait for more!
strawberryM1KO strawberryM1KO Jul 19, 2016
Marie gets on my nerves with the way she acts but I'm glad she stood for Sang. I think the Toma team could help handle her.
Pikanagel Pikanagel Jul 19, 2016
Aww.  That is forthright and vulnerable. Gabriel is the king of the makeover though.
BLTS2004 BLTS2004 Jul 19, 2016
I hate that she feels ugly. That breaks my heart. Just because she is different from Sang doesn't make her ugly. 🙁