Marie's Path

Marie's Path

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Justonename By Justonename Updated 5 days ago

Marie Sorenson knew it was wrong. But for years that was the only life she knew. She wanted to believe her mother, isn't that what kids are suppose to do? She saw the punishments Sang got, she sure as hell didn't want to be on the receiving end of those. So she turned a blind eye and kept quiet. She didn't know that sometimes mental abuse can have lasting effects just like physical abuse.
  After everything her sister went through, she still landed on top. She's pretty, smart, and she has 9 guys who would do anything for her.
  Marie knows what she thinks she see's in the mirror, a drab, dumpy girl. She keeps her head down, her hair hangs around her face, hiding her shame. 
She wants to change, she just doesn't know how.  Marie's path is hard, but with a little help, she might make it.
The Toma Team is trying to heal after Kayli left. They deal with the hurt in their own ways. But one by one a lone girl captures their attention and a lost member of their team finally comes home.

  This is a fanfiction based on C.L.Stone's Academy Series. I have no claim to them

Holy crap! You just addressed all those issues that had me tense! Crazy! Love Gabe.
K_Williams1 K_Williams1 Sep 04
I see her jealousy in her words.  Excellent job.  Derrick must like her if he's kissing her and their father is a tool!
Kohbstar Kohbstar Sep 06
Well, considering I can't stand Marie, I'm actually relating to her! I can't wait for more!
Marie gets on my nerves with the way she acts but I'm glad she stood for Sang. I think the Toma team could help handle her.
Pikanagel Pikanagel Jul 19
Aww.  That is forthright and vulnerable. Gabriel is the king of the makeover though.
BLTS2004 BLTS2004 Jul 19
I hate that she feels ugly. That breaks my heart. Just because she is different from Sang doesn't make her ugly. 🙁