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A Love Story Vyladxdante=vylante

A Love Story Vyladxdante=vylante

5.3K Reads 117 Votes 11 Part Story
Black Gryphon By Aphmaufordayz Completed

Dante is 18 and thinks he's strait but turns out to be gay when he kisses vylad which is 16 and vylad knows he's gay and falls in love with Dante at first sight and I'm not saying the whole story so let's go and read the story and I might update if asked

CarWritesFanfic CarWritesFanfic Jul 20, 2016
You spelled Zenix wrong at the end. And there could be more dialogue, but it's great nonetheless
MiintyGreen MiintyGreen Jul 19, 2016
I Think its Good! But, I do agree with car in the quotation mark sense, it makes it easier on the reader to understand. I believe this book Will become Popula! r
CarWritesFanfic CarWritesFanfic Jul 19, 2016
I like it! The only piece of advice that I have is quotation marks (aka. This: " ") it would make it easier for the reader to know when a character is talking and when they're not. Other than that, I really like it and think that this book can go places.