Dying Slowly

Dying Slowly

51.7K Reads 2.7K Votes 11 Part Story
Reese Kelly By Reese_Kelly Completed

Simplistic, logical, un-emotional, cold-hearted and unwanted, those words are used by everyone to describe Hella. Her looks are simplistic, her thoughts are logical, her words are cold-hearted, she lacks emotion and her being is unwanted, even by her parents. Hella has been the out-cast for as long as she can remember and everyone likes it that way. But now that he has her, he will show Hella that she isn't the only cold person out there. He is so icy that even the winter is not match for him, but as the frozen Hella begins to melt, she begins to wonder if there isn't more to this man, if he isn't the evil that he has potrays. Hella finds her answer, but it could mean the death of her, and those words are spoken quite literally.

alyssa2550 alyssa2550 Jul 26
interesting. she is so right though. good start but i am confused. kidnappers don't usually let their victims go alive. of course only one survived so i guess that makes sense.
OneDayOfTheWeek OneDayOfTheWeek Nov 01, 2014
I'm reading this a second time, and my mind will soon be blown again.
bonbonsanddietcoke bonbonsanddietcoke May 20, 2014
As was stated, interesting but lots of editing needed. A bit distracting...
HopeWinters_ HopeWinters_ Apr 05, 2014
A very intriguing prologue, a few spelling errors here and there but I ended up getting the gist of the story :) 
                              
                              The guy, I can already image him being Johnathan Rhys Meyers, don't know why but that's how I picture him. I want to know his reasoning so much!! Good luck in the wattpad prize :)
jen631 jen631 Mar 24, 2014
I'm intrigued love the beginning I'm looking forward to see what this story will unfold
FreshQueenT FreshQueenT Dec 27, 2013
LOVE IT!! <3
                              No happy ending like you would expect. Very nicely written!!