So many typos, not saying you suck at wrighing, just saying you should read over your wrighting before you post it so it's not hard to read
I mean, the story is great but the spelling and some punctuation is just idk.
No hate..but could you maybe spell check this..just a little
Imma be the first one to point this out... THE PIC WASN'T CENSORED VERY WELL
I liked the story but the spelling made me stop reading because it was so annoying
I couldn't even read it because your grammar is so incorrect.