The player

The player

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failingatlove By failingatlove Updated Oct 29

Sophia Jackson( not related to Percy Jackson) moves Philadelphia  and goes to a new school. She just broke up with her boyfriend and the last thing she needs is a new one...Especially since The schools player won't leave her alone

The cover is made by @1dsingoutloud

I think pretty good so far. Continue to have confidence in yourself and in your writing. Keep at it! :)
MartaxSofia MartaxSofia Oct 14
You should either have your chapters named "chapter one" or "chapter 1", they should all match.
Definitely same I trust no one...not even my mom, but that's other personal stuff so yeah...
Brilliant chapter. Again give an inside abt the character and her personality
Not too tall
                              Long hair
                              Nice legs
                              Nice body frame 
                              An almost perfect profile 
                              I like the intro😀
OMG, Gurrrrlllll! I love how you started it off. It is so interesting. I hope to be a writer like you!