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The player

The player

3.2K Reads 910 Votes 6 Part Story
failingatlove By failingatlove Updated Oct 29, 2016

Sophia Jackson( not related to Percy Jackson) moves Philadelphia  and goes to a new school. She just broke up with her boyfriend and the last thing she needs is a new one...Especially since The schools player won't leave her alone

The cover is made by @1dsingoutloud

AnonymousChick1 AnonymousChick1 Oct 15, 2016
I think pretty good so far. Continue to have confidence in yourself and in your writing. Keep at it! :)
MartaxSofia MartaxSofia Oct 14, 2016
You should either have your chapters named "chapter one" or "chapter 1", they should all match.
Abrea_Kirkland Abrea_Kirkland Oct 22, 2016
Definitely same I trust no one...not even my mom, but that's other personal stuff so yeah...
unconditional101 unconditional101 Oct 29, 2016
Brilliant chapter. Again give an inside abt the character and her personality
PrincessPoetess PrincessPoetess Nov 06, 2016
Not too tall
                              Long hair
                              Nice legs
                              Nice body frame 
                              An almost perfect profile 
                              I like the intro😀
crazynerdgirl123 crazynerdgirl123 Oct 24, 2016
OMG, Gurrrrlllll! I love how you started it off. It is so interesting. I hope to be a writer like you!