A Different Way.

A Different Way.

9.6K Reads 195 Votes 9 Part Story
Ashlee By ashleebrown Updated Nov 05, 2011

Bella decides to stay at Phoenix and not go to Forks. What she doesn't know is that things will still go wrong differently, but also the same.

ashleebrown ashleebrown Jul 05, 2011
@missmental1 Sorry i havnt g ot the facts right, i dont live in America at all, so sorry :)
katthecomplicated katthecomplicated Jun 26, 2011
Ummm. Just One Thought. It's Washington State not D.C. Washington D.C. Is more like a city than a state...
ashleebrown ashleebrown Feb 20, 2011
@XxBeccaHillxX 
                              
                              lol guud point, i might change that, thanks :D xx <3
RebeccaElizabethHill RebeccaElizabethHill Feb 19, 2011
great job, but also to make it sound like Charlie and Bella are like pausing or thinking, do this: 
                              
                              "Bella...? Honey, please? I really want you to come..." He paused. "Please...? It's been years...and...please, Bella?" 
                              IDK just a suggestion...but its okay lol 
                              xoxox
                              XxBeccaHillxX
ashleebrown ashleebrown Jan 03, 2011
@WithLoveEllie 
                              
                              That is right. Thanks i didnt think about that. Thanks
                              :)
WithLoveEllie WithLoveEllie Jan 03, 2011
This is good but did you think of why Edward wasnt in Pheonix in the actual books? Vampires cant go out in daylight no matter what. You needed to think about that.