In Too Deep [FIRST DRAFT; UNEDITED]

In Too Deep [FIRST DRAFT; UNEDITED]

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30 year old Anthony Williams is one of NY's finest. He has been on the force for about nine years has a loving woman and a beautiful six year old little girl to come home to and loves the life he lives. At least when he's not having issues at home. Although growing up on the east side of harlem Anthony dreamed of the day of being a hard working detective and isn't going to quit any time soon.          Angel, 26 year old Brooklyn girl who also loves the life she lives. Instead of continuing with her education she lives the life of slangin' weed and tricking off men. She cares for no one other than herself and her seven year old son and aint afraid to show it. 'Lifes a bitch then you die' is what she sees the world so she lives every day like its her last and is all about her paper.           What happens when these two opposites cross paths ? Are they really so opposite ? Let this story take you on a journey full of shocking twists, drama, love lost, broken trust, and new friendships being built.          Copyright © 2013 Neffie Gonzales

Tdanjour36 Tdanjour36 May 30
Like the story n I like angel character but I have feelin when she meets the dude, her whole personality will change but still like it
IeishaBowie IeishaBowie Dec 27, 2015
Uh-huh bitch lil dj on his way back to u right now as we speak tf
prettygal11021 prettygal11021 Aug 14, 2015
I'm loving this book so far! Just try and add new vocabulary into your writing please; more difficult words. as a reader I love to learn new words lol and up my grammar
meganisluv meganisluv Aug 14, 2015
For some girls they want the title and the ring And some girls dreamed of having their dream wedding and their dad or whoever walk them down aisle. Also if y'all not married something's you can't be entitled if y'all not married
alexcia13 alexcia13 Jun 03, 2015
She couldn't be talking to me like that. Hoe it's your child!
whTYuwant whTYuwant Jun 02, 2015
It's like he sayin she good enough to do everything a wife is supposed to do, but she not good enough to actually be his wife. Idk how society made okay to be  with a man and submit and clean and cook and have sex on a regular basis but for something is wrong with him marrying said woman