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Spotting love (Discontinued)

Spotting love (Discontinued)

19.8K Reads 190 Votes 21 Part Story
Kirsty By BringMeTheLight Updated Feb 02, 2012

Chrissie is the school loner, the loner with acne. No one notices her except to make fun of her and although she appears not to care inside she really does. But when the new boy arrives he's nice to her and they grow closer but then she discovers his secret and her life and the lives of others are put in serious danger and the big question is is does she trust him enough?

BringMeTheLight BringMeTheLight Apr 05, 2011
@buqqinsawriter Thank youu :))
                               Yh sure i'll check it out ;)
BringMeTheLight BringMeTheLight Mar 30, 2011
@lexmorgan2011 Hahaa glad u like it hopefully there'll be another chapter up soon :D :D
CAKersey CAKersey Jan 24, 2011
This is good, not my fave kind of book since I'm not rly into the romance (like most guys) but still rly good.
BringMeTheLight BringMeTheLight Dec 29, 2010
@brookedavis2015 Thank you for the feedback. I will try to improve my grammar.
BringMeTheLight BringMeTheLight Dec 26, 2010
@TheNuttyMonkey Thankks for the advice i will try to but no guarantees i'm not gr8 with grammar :/
TheNuttyMonkey TheNuttyMonkey Dec 26, 2010
It's a good start! You should totally continue it (:
                              I also have some advice, you should add in more commas to give your sentences a better structure ^^
                              can't wait to read the rest :D