Just some things i came up with... doubtlessly amateur but still solely a reflection of my inner thoughts and conflicts :)
'This is what I want to do,/When you make me this blue' and 'And have a dream/of a ridge, below it a stream' - i love these beautiful words.
I'm always drawn to those who call themselves amateur, because theirs are usually the best. you are no exception to this. your work I can tell comes from emotion, it comes through in every word and hits you like a wrecking ball in the most beautiful way. it's awesome.
Did you win the fight?
I liked this, but not a sad JaJa...sigh
AMAZING WHAT A PERSON CAN DO YOU TO YOU!
I LOVED IT.
I'M SERIOUS, YOU MIGHT BE THE GREATEST POET EVER WITH YOUR ORIGINAL TOPICS THAT YOU'RE AFRAID TO SHARE ^__^
@nicollettenikki thanks for commenting... and it's cufff...like a synonym for punch :)
Sorry but is that cut..?
Anyways this this was openhearted and honestly raw and very real.. Once again a very insightful touching piece of poetry that evoked different emotions!