Reflections Of An Amateur

Reflections Of An Amateur

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jamilla_ By jamilla_ Updated Dec 22, 2011

Just some things i came up with... doubtlessly amateur but still solely a reflection of my inner thoughts and conflicts :)

  • adunni
  • big
  • bond
  • darkness
  • death
  • hatred
  • jamilla
  • love
  • moon
  • mother
  • ocean
  • painting
  • parents
  • sad
  • slice
  • true
  • weird
  • wonderful
seasofme seasofme Jul 31, 2014
'This is what I want to do,/When you make me this blue'  and 'And have a dream/of a ridge, below it a stream' -  i love these beautiful words.
- - Jul 19, 2014
I'm always drawn to those who call themselves amateur, because theirs are usually the best. you are no exception to this. your work I can tell comes from emotion, it comes through in every word and hits you like a wrecking ball in the most beautiful way. it's awesome.
KAFrak KAFrak Mar 08, 2011
Did you win the fight?
                              
                              I liked this, but not a sad JaJa...sigh
Unpolished_Jen Unpolished_Jen Feb 01, 2011
OMG!!!
                              AMAZING WHAT A PERSON CAN DO YOU TO YOU!
                              I LOVED IT. 
                              I'M SERIOUS, YOU MIGHT BE THE GREATEST POET EVER WITH YOUR ORIGINAL TOPICS THAT YOU'RE AFRAID TO SHARE ^__^
jamilla_ jamilla_ Dec 31, 2010
@nicollettenikki thanks for commenting... and it's cufff...like a synonym for punch :)
nicollettenikki nicollettenikki Dec 29, 2010
Sorry but is that cut..? 
                              Anyways this this was openhearted and honestly raw and very real.. Once again a very insightful touching piece of poetry that evoked different emotions!