Reflections Of An Amateur

Reflections Of An Amateur

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jamilla_ By jamilla_ Updated Dec 22, 2011

Just some things i came up with... doubtlessly amateur but still solely a reflection of my inner thoughts and conflicts :)

seasofme seasofme Jul 31, 2014
'This is what I want to do,/When you make me this blue'  and 'And have a dream/of a ridge, below it a stream' -  i love these beautiful words.
rainingredroses rainingredroses Jul 19, 2014
I'm always drawn to those who call themselves amateur, because theirs are usually the best. you are no exception to this. your work I can tell comes from emotion, it comes through in every word and hits you like a wrecking ball in the most beautiful way. it's awesome.
KAFrak KAFrak Mar 08, 2011
Did you win the fight?
                              
                              I liked this, but not a sad JaJa...sigh
Unpolished_Jen Unpolished_Jen Feb 01, 2011
OMG!!!
                              AMAZING WHAT A PERSON CAN DO YOU TO YOU!
                              I LOVED IT. 
                              I'M SERIOUS, YOU MIGHT BE THE GREATEST POET EVER WITH YOUR ORIGINAL TOPICS THAT YOU'RE AFRAID TO SHARE ^__^
jamilla_ jamilla_ Dec 31, 2010
@nicollettenikki thanks for commenting... and it's cufff...like a synonym for punch :)
nicollettenikki nicollettenikki Dec 29, 2010
Sorry but is that cut..? 
                              Anyways this this was openhearted and honestly raw and very real.. Once again a very insightful touching piece of poetry that evoked different emotions!