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Cracks of a Mirror

Cracks of a Mirror

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Transcontinental By transcontinental_ Updated Dec 24, 2016

Ethan Dolan hadn't spoken to his twin brother in seven years when a bright pink-laced bouquet arrived at the front door of his rented home in New Jersey. The note inside read words that cracked through the mask he'd painted on for the past several years:  
         "You are invited to the wedding of Grayson Dolan and Eliza Wells."

Omg Y do I wanna marry the author of the book just by reading the first sentence 😂😂😂😂😂😂
*gasp and says*Woah daddy *in kian Lawley voices* 😂😂😂😂
'confirmation that he was indeed a flaw to his brothers perfection' awww ethan, this line gives me the feels
stabmeintheface stabmeintheface Aug 18, 2016
The way you paint the picture is exquisitely prestigious. Fine detail of body languages described here. Love it so much.
Dolans0714 Dolans0714 Nov 12, 2016
You've just dethroned any other fan fiction I've ever read, the detail is absolutely amazing and paints a vivid picture in minds of readers
serenejay serenejay Jul 15, 2016
Wow. Its so good. Simple, yet powerful choice of words and a swift, crisp pace that beautifully managed to evade the risk of cliché with most of the got-drunk-had-sex-in-the-heat-of-the-moment scenarios. I loved it :*