Unpredictable

Unpredictable

586 Reads 10 Votes 3 Part Story
hateheartheaven By hateheartheaven Updated Dec 27, 2010

Leigh , the girl that has a great boyfriend, named Junior. Shes lived in the say town her whole life, where everything was perfect except for one [Large] thing that ruined everything and now is changing things for the worse. Her mom met Nick a loveing man, and Leigh likes him but he wants them to move. How will her love last with Junior?, Will she survive in the diffrent down? Will she fit in? & Who will she meet...

Aries2 Aries2 Dec 28, 2010
I'm really curious to know where the story is going so far. Good work.
Aries2 Aries2 Dec 28, 2010
I like the way you started.
                              Though you need to use paragraphs to distinguish conversations. Really great effort.  :) 
xxzennyxx xxzennyxx Dec 25, 2010
 That wasn't too bad . am really interested to see what happens later on 
hateheartheaven hateheartheaven Dec 25, 2010
@riscoqueen Yes im sorry about that like beinq unrealist and all buht it has somethinq to do later in the futute; && @acakenson  i will (:
acakenson acakenson Dec 25, 2010
cool story so far :3
                              the house really intrigues me and it'll be interesting to see where you're going with this. read my story called Frost Bites please?
riscoqueen riscoqueen Dec 25, 2010
hey Not bad yet I dont know where the story is going yet but I suggest you keep going :D It didnt seem realistic to me that she would just go into a random house I was just like oh no imagine if someone just walked into ur house while you were in there that would be a bit creepy:d