Naomi-Mae: The Second Renesmee

Naomi-Mae: The Second Renesmee

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ALL CHAPTERS ARE EDITED

At the same time that Renesmee was born, so was her twin sister. She wasn't expected, no one saw her coming, things won't be the same with two of them or will they?

~Having to make a few changes so it may not make sense if you read past the edited chapters

NaomiHoyohoy NaomiHoyohoy Feb 04, 2015
Bruh that's my whole middle name! Besides the Mae and the Cullen of course
Flibutex Flibutex Sep 26, 2013
this is a good start, but it seems a little rushed. maybe next time, slow down a tad and be more descriptive? it's good though, so far and it seems promising - keep it up! :)
dogpower77 dogpower77 Sep 04, 2013
It was good. You just need to work on your spelling and grammar. I think you spelled "Knew" wrong. You put "New" which is incorrect. :) But that is okay, I used to do it. Anyways- I will enjoy this story. Update soon! XD ~Dogpower77