In love with Lucifer

In love with Lucifer

9.9K Reads 225 Votes 20 Part Story
Mix Salvatore By MixSalvatore Updated Sep 02

Update: I will edit all the chapters, because I have new ideas, but first I need to make this story a whole. 

Description: What do you do when the devil comes into your life? You would embrace him with joy or hit him with everything you got? Would you kill for him? Helen Whitakers is the lucky girl to meet the Angel/Demon that takes care of her dreams. She never fell in love and she doesn't believe in God.The inevitable is out there: unleashed, but why? You don't have answers, do you? Horror, love and a little black humor awaits you. Also, this has no connection with the new TV series Lucifer.

  • alone
  • angel
  • darkness
  • desperate
  • dispair
  • hope
  • love
  • paradise
  • wings
Raven226 Raven226 May 16, 2014
I'm sorry but… ya might wanna let the plot develop slowly. She can't possibly know all of this already. Let her get to know him and then fall in love with him.
Raven226 Raven226 May 16, 2014
Also, I think just a simple "never." Would have been enough. This was just overboard.
Raven226 Raven226 May 16, 2014
*know I will be occasionally correcting spelling/grammar mistakes. I hope to help you edit it and I do not mean to offend you, if I do, please tell me and I will stop. Thank you.