We are all entitled to our own opinion,these happen to be some of mine.
IN WHICH I GIVE YOU MY THOUGHTS AND OPINIONS ON HOW NOT TO WRITE A DEMIGOD FANFICTION!
honestly i wrote eleanora originally as a daughter of poseidon bc nico had hazel (and bianca) and jason had thalia and i felt that it was not fair percy didn't have a demigod sister or maybe he does and im just not up to that part but eiTHER WAY i deleted that and rewrote it anyways
You should talk about super mega awesome weapons that characters just happen to have. I mean, honestly a sword that can turn into a dagger and then a bow, but it's also a shield and spear?? What the freak
k so like I did this but Percy is not even in the book and she's his older sister...
You should totally mention the Avengers crossovers in which the Seven except Percy are dead and he's all dark and powerful and somehow can freaking defeat the Avengers WITHOUT being near water! Like bam, he punches the Hulk and Hulk's knocked out.
I don't remember Percy being a Hulkbuster :)
i have a pjo story in my drafts where the oc is percy's older sister- but none of those points are in the plot (except the love interest one); you reckon my story would still fall into cliche?