Switched instructors

Switched instructors

7.5K Reads 407 Votes 32 Part Story
💙Parkour💙 By Oliver0309 Completed

(Book 1)
Beatrice eaton was once the small girl from abnegation. Now, two years after, she trains the transfers. What happens when she meets the young abnegation boy, son of the prior family? (Tobias and tris swaps positions)

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justdarcy justdarcy Jan 22
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                              I think the suspense is really good for your story. I like the plot but sometimes it can be confusing😂 and when Marcus came (I know a lot of ppl have done this to Tobias) I kinda wonder if they just let him in or what? But overall love it
divergentpll divergentpll Aug 31, 2016
Something new, I like it. Quick question: he's a 2 years younger yes? Which I don't have a problem with cause my sister dates someone younger and my mom is older then my dad but just to clear things out
justdarcy justdarcy Jan 19
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                              I really like the idea of this and i have a divergent fan fic so it made me happy to read it haha😂 
                              
                              I would suggest spacing out the paragraphs a little but it isn't that big of a deal. 
                              
                              I really do love this book though😄