Vampire Academy Sequel The Beginning Of The End

22 Part Story 41.8K Reads 711 Votes
Roza By RozalittleDhampir Completed
Rose has a happy life with dimitri, the love of her life, but there are still things to be sorted. for example, adrian. They hadnt talked for years, but when lissa sees adrian drunk by the side of the road, Rose knows she has to put things right. will adrian find love? what will happen to tasha? read to find out! 
    
    once again, not my account ( aime ) it is georgies so give her credit 4 that. she also helped me with some of the ideas such as meeting adrian at kfc and the kids names so creadit her 4 that as well. and credit her 4 being awesome.
    thx:)
Ooh, a sequel >:D I like it, you portray Adrian and Dimitri very well. I think you could work a bit on molding Rose. I find it's the hardest to capture her true character on paper. I haven't really gotten the hang of writing her dialogue yet either, so don't worry :) At some parts you have Rose right on, at some, you start to lose Richelle Mead's original creation of her. Overall, great fanfic though :D I would love to see what happens  ^_^
Ooh, a sequel >:D I like it, you portray Adrian and Dimitri very well. I think you could work a bit on molding Rose. I find it's the hardest to capture her true character on paper. I haven't really gotten the hang of writing her dialogue yet either, so don't worry :) At some parts you have Rose right on, at some, you start to lose Richelle Mead's original creation of her. Overall, great fanfic though :D I would love to see what happens  ^_^
Ooh, a sequel >:D I like it, you portray Adrian and Dimitri very well. I think you could work a bit on molding Rose. I find it's the hardest to capture her true character on paper. I haven't really gotten the hang of writing her dialogue yet either, so don't worry :) At some parts you have Rose right on, at some, you start to lose Richelle Mead's original creation of her. Overall, great fanfic though :D I would love to see what happens  ^_^
Ooh, a sequel >:D I like it, you portray Adrian and Dimitri very well. I think you could work a bit on molding Rose. I find it's the hardest to capture her true character on paper. I haven't really gotten the hang of writing her dialogue yet either, so don't worry :) At some parts you have Rose right on, at some, you start to lose Richelle Mead's original creation of her. Overall, great fanfic though :D I would love to see what happens  ^_^
Ooh, a sequel >:D I like it, you portray Adrian and Dimitri very well. I think you could work a bit on molding Rose. I find it's the hardest to capture her true character on paper. I haven't really gotten the hang of writing her dialogue yet either, so don't worry :) At some parts you have Rose right on, at some, you start to lose Richelle Mead's original creation of her. Overall, great fanfic though :D I would love to see what happens  ^_^
Ooh, a sequel >:D I like it, you portray Adrian and Dimitri very well. I think you could work a bit on molding Rose. I find it's the hardest to capture her true character on paper. I haven't really gotten the hang of writing her dialogue yet either, so don't worry :) At some parts you have Rose right on, at some, you start to lose Richelle Mead's original creation of her. Overall, great fanfic though :D I would love to see what happens  ^_^