Taming Him | pjm #Wattys2016

Taming Him | pjm #Wattys2016

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지수 By simplyhosh Updated Oct 19

A Park Jimin FanFiction FT. Seventeen
          
          "I made all this effort for you. To prove to you I'm worth having," as soon as those words slipped from my mouth, Jimin perked up and glanced at me with incredulous eyes.

"W-What. . ." Jimin blurted as if he had seen a ghost.

"Familiar with that line?" I inquired as I slowly began inching away from Jimin.

"I think. It reminded me of someone." Jimin replies without hesitating. I grinned at his sudden reaction.
          
          **Read to find out** (And no, this story is not that type of cliché story you've always thought of judging by the description.)
          
          Warning: Triggering words are contained in this book (ex. suicide, bullying/harassment etc.) and mild cursing.
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          simplyhosh © 2016
            -Any plagiarism will be reported, this story rightfully belongs to me-

ChocoMalt ChocoMalt Sep 06
Your sentence structure and writing is very clean and straight to the point. I think the only problem that gets in the way of the flow is the strange switch in tenses. Pick past or present and stick to it.
jeonjayeon jeonjayeon Aug 13
YASSS GO GURL YASSSS 
                              this line reminds me of a song called "Worth It" lol
Baekhyun_io Baekhyun_io Aug 15
WHAT THE- UGH, I DON'T THINK I'M GONNA LIKE ANY OF THE OTHER PEOPLE IN THIS BOOK!
Baekhyun_io Baekhyun_io Aug 15
Aww, how can she still like him after being called a slut?!😥😑
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              Never mind, I would too
ChocoMalt ChocoMalt Sep 06
Inconsistent tenses. You switch from present to past to present here.
ChocoMalt ChocoMalt Sep 06
Check the way you phrase your sentences. I think it gets confusing because you're using mixed tenses so your wording becomes muddled up.