Its a mix of poems I make up. Its mostly going to be haiku and Sonnets in it.
Those are really good. I love the last one most. probably because I love the ocean. ^-^
I really liked them! My favorites had two be the last 2 especially the one about light. IT reminded me of one of my favorite video games, that has the most beautiful message every. "There is always light."
2nd stanza, first line, it's only 4 syllables.
3rd stanza, second line, you have 8 syllables
3rd stanza, last line, you have 6 syllables
5th stanza, second line, you have 9 syllables
Haiku format is 5,7,5
but the message was very good!!