Random Poems

Random Poems

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Victor By Flare1 Updated Apr 15, 2013

Its a mix of poems I make up. Its mostly going to be haiku and Sonnets in it.

YumikoSuzuhara YumikoSuzuhara Dec 26, 2010
Those are really good. I love the last one most. probably because I love the ocean. ^-^
YumikoSuzuhara YumikoSuzuhara Dec 26, 2010
I really liked them! My favorites had two be the last 2 especially the one about light. IT reminded me of one of my favorite video games, that has the most beautiful message every. "There is always light."
AlbeitWeird AlbeitWeird Dec 11, 2010
2nd stanza, first line, it's only 4 syllables.
                              3rd stanza, second line, you have 8 syllables
                              3rd stanza, last line, you have 6 syllables
                              5th stanza, second line, you have 9 syllables
                              Haiku format is 5,7,5
                              but the message was very good!!