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Mission 101

Mission 101

514 Reads 3 Votes 5 Part Story
Sarah By Sassy_sistah Updated Jan 18, 2011

Sarah, born into a family of agents, has to put up with a lot of harassment from everyone about living up to her parents killer reputation. As a teenager, she still has to deal with the normal teenage girl issues: Boys, school and gossip! ASWELL as trying to please her parents!  Can she live up to the pressure? Or is she just going to be that one bulb that doesn't shine as brightly as the others?

XLive_LaughX XLive_LaughX Dec 26, 2010
Good old Sarah I love it!! I can't believe u wrote that u r soo talented!!
                              Haha one grammar though makeup on not make on hehe just that but otherwise
                              Seems to be popular YAY!!
                              Your good irish buddy
Sassy_sistah Sassy_sistah Dec 25, 2010
@daydreamer1977 Haha fair enough! Nah, if you see any mistakes big or small, it's good to know :) English isn't one of my strong points so it's kind of silly writing a book in the first place, but hey? It's not so bad :P
daydreamer1977 daydreamer1977 Dec 24, 2010
@Sarah_26 Happy to help, never sure to mention them, tiny or not.  Look forward to reading more, to be honest i should not even be on here to bake and prep, for tomorrow, even though its just me, my partner and our kids, still, that's all we need.
Sassy_sistah Sassy_sistah Dec 24, 2010
@daydreamer1977 Thanks for the feed back! :) I will try and get those mistakes fixed as soon as I can, thank you for pointing them out! :) 
Desultory Desultory Dec 24, 2010
There are a few grammar mistakes. I'm interested to see what "combat" is. I can't wait for the next part I need some spice to my chili!
NeverShoutAlex NeverShoutAlex Dec 22, 2010
Hey! So I really like this, just a few grammar mistakes but still love it!