The Mermaid's Song

The Mermaid's Song

48.1K Reads 1.4K Votes 10 Part Story
Lauren By Pearlywhites Updated Jan 31, 2013

Adam suffers insomnia, and the only cure he can find is to wander off to the beach, stare out at the waves, and fall asleep to his own perfect symphony in his ears.  One night, a new instrument is added to the symphony, a voice, a sweet, alluring, mysterious voice.  It lulls Adam to sleep, and it is his peace.  But Adam is afraid to approach the mysterious singer, and when he does, strange, inhuman thing begin happening.

this>>> i cant help but read on, its so simple yet so good!!
Dezstany_J Dezstany_J Oct 13, 2014
Your first chapter has a lot of imagery and I think it is amazing.
StacieKim StacieKim Jun 11, 2013
This is a very interesting storyline... I can't wait to read more!
99shadesofellie 99shadesofellie Apr 06, 2013
I am addicted to this story and you haven't updated it in such a long time! Where are youuuuuu? :P
Aprildayz Aprildayz Mar 02, 2013
Wow this is amazing! Its so creative! I actually like the fact that we don't know much about the characters yet
Dizzie6185 Dizzie6185 Jan 18, 2013
This is good! I like the song she sings! The only thing is that you haven't really done much to make your character stand out. I haven't the slightest idea who he is. All I know is he has insomnia. Looking forward to getting to know him better!