Identity (part 1) & Acceptance (part 2)

Identity (part 1) & Acceptance (part 2)

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Sailorgirl By Sailorgirl Updated Nov 19, 2012

Princess Stee has powers which she keeps hidden from all but a select few to aviod causing an uprising in the Kingdom of Aharoma. Her father's nation faces challenges from an unknown foe, and a dark stranger appears with knowledge of her mother's side of the family. With her 18th Birthday fast approaching, Stee must learn all she can from him. With war looming, Stee must journey to find her mother's people and reunite them and the Aharomans, not only for the sake of the war, but also because of the prophecy. The prophecy surrounds Stee, the man and the Aharoman girl and deals with the history and ancestory of their peoples.

AnnaErishkigal AnnaErishkigal Apr 07, 2013
If I might make a suggestion?  To hook your reader, why not start out with the poisoned cake and the fact she detects this due to a magical ability that must be thoughtfully applied?
EstherL99 EstherL99 Apr 06, 2013
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KAFrak KAFrak Dec 22, 2010
@Sailorgirl No problem your writing put a lot of writers to shame on this site
KAFrak KAFrak Dec 22, 2010
I'm not in to the plot, BUT I think the idea is original and dont stress about the writing, you're good at it. Just focus on the plot and keeping this interesting.
                              
                              
                              
                              pst, check out one of my stories