Who are you

Who are you

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LadyCat13 By LadyCat13 Completed

"Marinette, GET OUT OF THAR!" Chat yelled as stone heart ruthlessly threw her into a brick wall out of his way. "HEALP ME" Mari screamed in pain holding here shoulder. Their was blood dripping dow her chin from the gash on here fore head. Mari ended up passing out in Alyas arms.

The next day Mari woke up in hospital with here parents, Alya and chat by here side. "Wh-what's going on, ch-chat is that you!", "yes Marinette, now pleas sleep". 

The next time Marinette woke up she was back at home and it was 8:00am "I'm lait for school" she said as she bolted up out of her bed. She piled on here pink jeans and tied here hair in here regular twin tails, she ran down stairs where she bumped into here dad "what are you doing out of bed" he said pushing here back up stairs "but dad I'm late for school", no  for the next week, or until your head heals" here mum chimed from behind the counter. Suddenly Mari felt here head thump and here whole body began to ache. "O-ok", she walked up to here bea...

ImJustAmx ImJustAmx Nov 02
It's not the fact you don't suck at writing. Your grammar is just very... strange
If you want help I'm practicing my editing since that's what career I'd like to pursue /:
                              Sorry, I'm a Grammar Nazi.
I was hospitalized for the first 3  days of school last, last year and it was so awkward when I came into the classroom cause I was also late.
                              T R I G G E R E D
I liked it but you did spell Help,Me and There wrong. But i liked it regardless
meena2020 meena2020 Sep 19
                              Once I FAINTED and I still went to school the next day