Who are you

Who are you

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LadyCat13 By LadyCat13 Completed

"Marinette, GET OUT OF THAR!" Chat yelled as stone heart ruthlessly threw her into a brick wall out of his way. "HEALP ME" Mari screamed in pain holding here shoulder. Their was blood dripping dow her chin from the gash on here fore head. Mari ended up passing out in Alyas arms.

The next day Mari woke up in hospital with here parents, Alya and chat by here side. "Wh-what's going on, ch-chat is that you!", "yes Marinette, now pleas sleep". 

The next time Marinette woke up she was back at home and it was 8:00am "I'm lait for school" she said as she bolted up out of her bed. She piled on here pink jeans and tied here hair in here regular twin tails, she ran down stairs where she bumped into here dad "what are you doing out of bed" he said pushing here back up stairs "but dad I'm late for school", no  for the next week, or until your head heals" here mum chimed from behind the counter. Suddenly Mari felt here head thump and here whole body began to ache. "O-ok", she walked up to here bea...

beekayohh beekayohh Mar 26
Grammar like this makes me not wanna read a story. Just saying.
ImJustAmx ImJustAmx Nov 02, 2016
It's not the fact you don't suck at writing. Your grammar is just very... strange
When your OCD takes action and corrects the words in your head and you try not to say anything
Shealynbenton Shealynbenton Nov 21, 2016
If you want help I'm practicing my editing since that's what career I'd like to pursue /:
MusicMasta MusicMasta Dec 10, 2016
Lol that is exactly what I would say if I had been smashed into a brick wall "Healp Me!" xD
DemonicMarichat DemonicMarichat Sep 01, 2016
There.
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              Help.
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              Down.
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              Sorry, I'm a Grammar Nazi.