River of Dreams

River of Dreams

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puppluv By puppluv Updated Jul 12, 2013

"Dreams feel real while we're in them. It's only when we wake up that we realize something was actually strange." 

Amy Green is a small town girl, starting her freshman year all alone in a big prestigious high school. Then suddenly, when the humble town of Hazelbrookes has a population surge with hundreds of rich, beautiful people moving into her life, all that changes. Something is off about the new kids in town, and it's not just their inhuman attractiveness. At first, it's subtle little things that cue Amy in, like how they never eat anything, or how they all have overwhelming amounts of charisma that tend to allure even the strongest willed people to them. Nothing too big. But after the boy Amy crushes on (or rather, feels the biggest pull to) bites her in the nurse's office at school, she realizes that everything is way bigger than she had originally expected.

brooklynn013087 brooklynn013087 Sep 06, 2014
OK FINE MAKE ME FEEL LIKE I HAVE NO LIFE!! SEE IF I CARE!!! * opens window jumps out and try's to land it but face plants into the ground. :(
puppluv puppluv May 24, 2013
Thank you for the comments. I'm so glad you guys like it! :) So you didn't find this chapter too boring? If it weren't on Wattpad and you picked it up at random, would you decide to continue reading it?@blaxsoda @thewriterslife  @bjpatt
thewriterslife thewriterslife May 09, 2013
I saw a comment that basically said your story was cliche but what's wrong with that its your  work your idea and characters its how you write it and describe it is what sets you to a different standard it's a cute story with potential 
                              Dialogue was fun and intamate
What_the_dickens What_the_dickens Dec 27, 2012
This start was really good! I love your style of writing which sounds professional and the way you captured all her moods and thoughts. Usually I get a bit turned off by 3 pages for the first chapter but I kept reading and really liked it! Fat...um shapely, lol! Keep writing, voted :)
melissassilem melissassilem Dec 26, 2012
The story sounds so interesting! Definitely going to keep reading (:
salamasunny salamasunny Dec 24, 2012
This was great! This story is really unique, and the plot seems really deep and thought out. You have a very nice writing style, so everything just flows effortlessy. I voted and am reading :)