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Entrance: #Wattys2016

Entrance: #Wattys2016

38.8K Reads 1K Votes 15 Part Story
chocolatefantasies1 By KLowe1 Updated Dec 01, 2016

Excerpt From Book:


Its been three days and Cat hasn't called me yet. I know she feels what I'm feeling. I can't stop thinking about her. She captivates my sleeping and waking. I want to see her, talk to her freely, go on dates with her, be free to express my feelings to her. I would also love to bend her over a table and fuck her till we both collapse with exhaustion.

Explore her both with hand and tongue. As she cums for me. Shit I'm horny. As my cock twitches, I grab it tempted to jerk of right there. Picturing her riding me as I grip her hair, has my cock growing harder by the second.

Fuck. I need her. The things I will do to her when she submits.I smile to myself, thinking how good she must taste. Dammit I need to relax. I need a cold shower.
Catherine Lewis: Hot Headed Stubborn
Anthony Swatski: Determined Alpha Male

Follow their journey of awareness,passion and maybe finding a love so complete it seems unreal. Will she let him in, will he crack her.

*I update every Monday

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#writing-contest #Wattys2016


MusoleTam MusoleTam Apr 28
Not trying to sound over dramatic which I am, I know but just outline of the beginning of the story am already interested and fascinated, I can't help but want to read more! Good work keep it up. Your hands truly work wonders!
BubblyWitch03 BubblyWitch03 Jul 23, 2016
Grammar/Punctuation: 7.5/10
                              The opening chapter of the book is great, I prefer this chapter more
                              Plot: 8/10
                              My opinion for this chapter is that try to bold the pov and also elaborate the first chapter more
                              Description: 7.5/10
MayaNovel MayaNovel Aug 24, 2016
                              He chapter was a bit short and you could of added a little more detail to her actions but all and all it was a amazing.
                              And the grammar and punctuation is a bit off but your story is amazing so far.
neharica neharica Aug 06, 2016
                              Okay so this chapter is short and many things are not happening here. I suggest you to write more action in your chapters. Look out for grammar and punctuation.
janmwhite janmwhite Jul 23, 2016
I can tell ur from JA (or maybe another Caribbean island) since u use this word. Lmao, I can't tell you how many times I've had people correcting me because 'it should be 'people', not 'persons'' *rolls eyes*
KLowe1 KLowe1 Feb 18
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